Outline
Paragraph Free Hugs Campaign by Arini
Purnamasari
Title : Love is Free Hugs
Topic Sentence :
There is a boy using glasses brought a paper.
a.
Major supporting sentence 1 :
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Yes, he gave offers free hugs to everyone
Minor supporting
sentence :
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At first, there was no one person that care about him.
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But he never give up! He still
with his paper ' free hugs '
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And again , no one cares
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People are too busy with their
own affairs , running short on time , perhaps it's they deem unimportant .
b.
Major supporting sentence 2 :
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This guy is still running and
offers a free hug , and finally an old woman approached and embraced warmly .
Minor
supporting sentence :
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One by one people started coming
over to this guy and hugged him
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People who previously didn't
care about this man , now came over and hugged warmly
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Honestly, it's very touching
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Eventually people started to
follow what is in this man's doing .
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They bring a paper with the
same purpose to give free hugs to everyone ..
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They cuddle with anyone who
approached , they even cuddle together
c.
Major supporting sentence 3 :
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But when everyone started to
follow what was done by this man ,a policeman came and prevent this campaign.
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Minor supporting sentence :
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This man is not desperate , he
began collecting signatures of every person that he met.
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The purpose of collecting
signatures to support that it's to continue the ' free hugs ' campaign..
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And total signatures that he
got it's about 10,000 .
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So amazing !Finally the police
can't stop this campaign , 10,000 people have supported this event
Concluding sentence :
And I think, the main idea of this video is a warmth. Warmth which human
beings must to share and love. Why all is not considered too important ? when
they don't have to pay for it . Warm embrace , is a simple way to make everyone
be , one .
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