FINAL ASSIGNMENT WRITING II : OUTLINE OF CARS

By :

Luh Suweni (1212021039)

I Made Gede Adi Kerta Yasa (1212021050)

Title                            : The Bigger the Car, the safer you are

Topic Sentence            : Big cars are safer than small cars for two reasons.

Major Supporting Sentence 1:

The first reason is it's a fact of physics that big car has heavier mass than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

The small car has lighter mass which is generally not as safe as larger or big car.

Large vehicles that belong to big cars have longer hoods and bigger crush zones, which gives them an advantage in frontal crashes.

According to the 2011 Insurance Institute for Highway Safety (IIHS) figures, fatalities per million registered vehicles decreased 55 percent for the mini car category and 47 percent for the small car category.

There was a 51 percent decrease in fatalities for midsize cars and 45 percent for large sedans.

Major Supporting Sentence 2:

The second reason is the vehicles weight of big car its resistance to rolling over better than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

While small cars don't roll over easily, they lack weight and, until recently, were less likely to have advanced safety features like electronic stability control (ESC) or full side airbags.

Concluding Sentence:

So, having a big car is a better choice to guarantee your safety than small car.