Writing III Narrative text : The Undelivered Feeling

            “To break person’s heart is simple, first give hopes and destroy it”. That quote is right. Love is feeling when you meet a person, make contact and finally you will feel comfortable with that person. Whenever you fall in love, it often creates a huge energy inside your mind, heart and life called ‘HOPE’ which has potential to change your mood, personality, or even your life. Unfortunately, the love in real life will not always meet happy ending like in fairytales because the more love you feel, the more hopes you get and once those hopes destroyed, the pain you take will know no limit. That was my feeling when I tried to write a love story in a blank paper called my life. The story was so good until I realize how fail the story was.

            The story started in a rainy day when I looking for a book in a bookstore. I finally found the book at the corner of store. There was two books left and then I took one book rapidly. When I took the book, a smooth hand took another one. It was a girl, she asked me about the book to ensure the title. When I turned my face, I saw a young beautiful girl with white smooth complexion and long hair stands in front of me. She asked many things to me about that book. I learned that she loved to read the book like I did. Before she went home, we gave our phone number to each other and I knew, her name was Wanda. It was the beginning of the storm.

            I felt like found a big oasis in the desert. She texted me every day, there was no day without her messages. She even asked my condition, my daily life my school, etc. She was fulfill the emptiness in my life when we were together. I like her welcome character, she told me everything about her family, hobbies, and more. It makes me think I was so valuable to her. The time passed, we had been together for one month. Slow but sure I started realized that I loved her.

            Day by day we were getting closer and closer. The more day passed, the more hopes I got. Later on I encourage myself to throw my ‘Jomblo’ status and make her to become my girlfriend. Yes, I planned to state my love to her so I prepared everything that I might be need like flower, song, poet everything as long as it helped my plan. I invited her to get dinner and she responded my invitation excitedly. The night finally came, we were getting dinner near beach where we usually spent our time together. When I was ready to state my feeling, her last word ruined everything I planned. She said that she was accepted other guy as her boyfriend and more, she said that she said I just a figure of brother to her, not more. It felt like stroke by thunder storm in a sunny day which made me cannot say anything. I wanted to say ‘ I LOVE YOU’ to her but I chose not to. It would hurt her feeling and mine as well.

            Indeed, this unsuccessful love story gave me so much pain. I never imagine that she just treat me as her brother, I got ‘Friend Zoned’ without I realized it. I just keep my feeling to her just for avoiding me from hurting her feeling.

Writing III : Narrative Text : When the Fate Says ‘NO!’

            Everyone must be proud if had chance to represent their region to national event. So do I, I was so proud when got chance to represent Bali to national event which held by WHO in Indonesia. As the leader of ‘Tabanan youth Red cross' community I was so happy, my subordinate also supported me to go to the event, my family, friend, red cross staff did the same thing. I felt like flying high in the sky like the gallant eagle but suddenly get shot by a poisonous arrow and fall to the earth. My pride, my effort, and my promise ruined by an accident. Something that I never expect will happen in my life.

            When I was in senior high school, I was an ambassador of my school to participate in ‘Tabanan youth Red Cross community’ under Tabanan’s Red Cross community name. The time passed, I was elected as their leader and this is my first time to lead an organization. I tried my best and luckily I could lead my team to win some competitions and even brought Tabanan as runner up in ‘Jumpa Bakti Gembira Province Bali 2011’. It was my biggest achievement as a leader.

            A few weeks later, the head of Tabanan Red Cross called me to the office. He said that I got an invitation letter from Indonesia Red Cross community to represent Bali in ‘Jumbara Nasional 2011’ that held by WHO in Gorontalo. Tabanan only had one ambassador not like the other regency which had 2 ambassador which made me thought to give my best for my regency. So since that day I studied hard about Red Cross material, came to the intern meeting and sharing, also trained my body every day. Just in a month my effort showed its result. I was confident enough to go to the National Jumbara.

            Three days before my flight I prepared everything that I need. The clothes, medicine, equipment, and many more things. At night after I was mepamit  my head suddenly felt dizzy even I cannot open my eyes. My parents told me to get rest but my head still dizzy and more, my body’s temperature increased. My parents became so worried so they brought me to the hospital and you know what? The doctor said that I got typhoid and must  got rest for few weeks. Oh my God, the doctor’s words just like a spear which thrust my heart again and again. In the end I cannot go to Gorontalo and Tabanan doesn’t has any single person as the ambassador.

            Indeed, that memory was so painful for me. My pride, my promise, and every single effort I did in a month become nothing! It disappeared like dust! To be honest I was so miserable that time or can be saying like a trauma. Even it was so painful but I learn one thing, as human every effort we did is cannot be separated with our fate.       

Writing III Descriptive Text : 'You Are the Apple of My Eye'

            ‘You are the apple of my eye’ this idiom is very suitable to I Gusti Ayu Made Novitasari. She is my girlfriend and I love her so much. She was born on November 4^th 1995 in Buleleng. Now she lives in Singaraja and studies at Japanese Education department UNDIKSHA SINGARAJA. My girlfriend is so beautiful and very care with me as her boyfriend but she still reach a ton of achievement as a student. I’m so proud of her.

            My girlfriend who called ‘Intan’ in her daily activity is a very beautiful girl. She has a Chinese appearance from her mother like slanted-eyes, white complexion, and straight hair. She who also called ‘Nuo Hui Can’ in Chinese has 160 cm height and 46 cm weight. It makes her looks ideal not too fat and not too thin.

            She is always care with me. When I was sick in my boarding house I cannot get up for a week but she visited me almost every day. She brought me some porridge and medicine after her class and accompanied me for one hour every day. I was so touched with her concern because I know she has many things to do like her assignment and business family. That’s make me feel so happy because I love the right girl.

            She had spent her time with me since she started her study at UNDIKSHA but looks like it doesn’t affect her achievement as student. At the beginning she reached achievement as queen of Japanese education department, and then she also reached the 2^nd runner-up position in Putera Puteri UNDIKSHA 2014. Recently, she competed in duta GENRE kabupaten Bueleleng 2014 along with me and luckily we got 2^nd runner up puteri for her and 2^nd runner-up putera for me. Her score in class was also wonderful. She got the 2^nd place for the best student in her class last semester.

            Indeed, now she become one of important person to me. A beautiful girl who care about you most and has many achievement, who do not want to have a girlfriend like that? Yes I’m so lucky to be with her. She is really ‘The apple of my eye’

              

Writing III Descriptive Text : THE ROCK !!!

         

             Dwayne Johnson who also known as ‘The Rock’ on the ring is my favorite wrestler. He was born on May 2^nd 1972 in Hayward, California. His height is 196 cm with 120 kg weight. Dwayne is the grandson of the famous wrestler Peter Maivia and the son of the wrestler as well Rocky Johnson which makes him become the third generation wrestler in his family tree. He is the great guy with many talents. Dwayne Johnson has skill as wrestler and actor who shows many achievement in his careers.

              As the wrestler, The Rock started his career in 1995. He was trained by his father who also the wrestler along with some of his relatives. After took a year for training Dwayne started his debut in 1996 when he known as ‘Rocky Maivia’ at that time. It was the combination of his grandfather and father’s name. Unfortunately, his decision to use his grandfather and father’s name made their fans angry. So after he became Intercontinental champion in 1998, Dwayne decided to use name ‘The Rock’. His great confidence made me proud because even people around him hated him, he still go on and prove that he is not follower of his grandfather and father.

            As an actor Dwayne has become the great actor as well. His first debut was in movie entitled ‘Beyond the Mat’ in 1999. After this first movie, some home production signed contract with him especially for some action movies that very suitable with him such as ‘The mummy returns’ (2001) ‘The scorpion king’ (2002) and still continuous until his movie in 2015 entitle ‘Fast and Furious 7’.

            Even he is so busy with both of his career but Dwayne proved that he could make many achievement in his careers. In 2001 he won the awards as the best actor in ‘Choice Sleazebag’ for his acting in ‘The Mummy returns’, also he nominated has the best fighter, the favorite male action star, favorite male butt kicker, and his last nomination as Artist of the year in 2014.

            Dwayne Johnson is the multitalented person. His achievement as wrestler and actor proved that he is the great guy who has spirit to do something for good even when you are hated by people around you. That undying spirit inspiring many of his fans.