FINAL ASSIGNMENT WRITING II : CARS

THE BIGGER THE CAR, THE SAFER YOU ARE

Big cars become safer than small cars for two reasons. The first reason is it was a fact of physics that big car has heavier mass than small car. The small car has lighter mass which is generally not as safe as larger or big car. The mass of cars are very affecting how the cars perform on the road. The heavier the car the more stable it would move. Large vehicles that belong to big cars have longer hoods and bigger crush zones. It gives them an advantage in frontal crashes. Car’s hoods basically use to protect the car from any hit from outside and keep the passenger’s safe. The bigger hood it has, the bigger crush zone it would be. A small car that has little hood cannot give the passenger big crash zone. It would be more dangerous if incident happen rather than bigger cars. According to the 2011 Insurance Institute for Highway Safety (IIHS) figures, fatalities per million registered vehicles decreased 55 percent for the mini car category and 47 percent for the small car category. There was a 51 percent decrease in fatalities for midsize cars and 45 percent for large sedans.The second reason is the vehicles weight of big car its resistance to rolling over better than small car. While small cars don't roll over easily, they lack weight and, until recently, were less likely to have advanced safety features like electronic stability control (ESC) or full side airbags. So, having a big car is a better choice to guarantee your safety than small car.

BY : I Made Gede Adi Kerta Yasa (1212021050)

FINAL ASSIGNMENT WRITING II : OUTLINE OF CARS

By :

Luh Suweni (1212021039)

I Made Gede Adi Kerta Yasa (1212021050)

Title                            : The Bigger the Car, the safer you are

Topic Sentence            : Big cars are safer than small cars for two reasons.

Major Supporting Sentence 1:

The first reason is it's a fact of physics that big car has heavier mass than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

The small car has lighter mass which is generally not as safe as larger or big car.

Large vehicles that belong to big cars have longer hoods and bigger crush zones, which gives them an advantage in frontal crashes.

According to the 2011 Insurance Institute for Highway Safety (IIHS) figures, fatalities per million registered vehicles decreased 55 percent for the mini car category and 47 percent for the small car category.

There was a 51 percent decrease in fatalities for midsize cars and 45 percent for large sedans.

Major Supporting Sentence 2:

The second reason is the vehicles weight of big car its resistance to rolling over better than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

While small cars don't roll over easily, they lack weight and, until recently, were less likely to have advanced safety features like electronic stability control (ESC) or full side airbags.

Concluding Sentence:

So, having a big car is a better choice to guarantee your safety than small car.

Writting Assignment : Canteen “Seru” during the weekdays

Canteen “Seru” is the most crowded canteen in Kampus Bawah in which provides a lot of things for the students during their weekdays and there are also various activities there. When we come to canteen “Seru”, we will see so many things and people who are doing various activities there.Canteen “Seru”provides a lot of snacks, bread, noodles, crackers, candies, and also rice pockets as their food.There are also provides soft drinks, tea, coffee as their drinks.Not just food and drink, canteen “Seru” also has stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan and glasses to support the activities there.In the canteen “Seru”, we can see the seller do a lot of activities such as washing and cooking. All of buyers also can do some activities while waiting for their food, they sit and having chat each other. Some of them speak about their problem, their study, or even their score. Sometimes, the students eat or drink their meal at the canteen but some of them prefer to bring it to the class.Canteen “Seru” have two sellers, they can serve somethings that the buyers want. They can be waiter or cashier.Buyers just need to order what they want, then the waiter will come to serve their order .After finishing their meal, they can pay it to the cashier.Food and drink which are served in this canteen have different taste. They use their own flavor, its different with other. In general, the taste of the food in canteen Seru is very delicious, but if you want to have your own taste you can ask them to make it more spicy, sweet, salty or even more crispy.The refrigerator is full of sweet and fresh drink.The smell of food and drink often makes the students want to finish the class earlier.The smell of burning food, delicious, and spicy is like the devil that can disturb students’ concentration.And also, the smell of fragrant drink makes the students cannot endure their thirsty feeling. In the end, canteen “Seru” is exactly a place for students to get some food and drinks but sometimes it can disturb the concentration of students to study during the class. Especially during noon.

Final 'Free Hug' Campaign

Share Your Happiness Trough Hugs

There was a tall man with long hair and wearing eyeglasses was holding the board and wandering around the town square to offer the happiness to the other. At first, people ignored the man. They try to keep the distance with the man, may be they think he is insane or else, some response by smiling, and some take picture/video with their gadget to the man with ‘Free Hugs’ sign. But, the man doesn’t give up. He keep wandering around the city while offering the free hug. Next, there were elder woman who carry many plastic bags change this situation. She accepted the request from the man to get free hugs. This act attracts the people to accept, to support and to do the free hug.

Many people attracted to this campaign, everybody whether male, female, old and young wanted to get a free hugs from the man, it so touching. Unfortunately, bad thing happen. Police suddenly prohibited ‘Free Hugs’ campaign. Some people tried to explain to the police about what they did. After that, the man who starts this campaign tried to gather signatures from society to show how many people support the activity.  The result was shocking! He got 10.000 signatures from the societies who support this event. Finally, this campaign still goes on, the society accepted the event. In the end, the police also willing to accept the free hug.

There are so many people in our environment that need us. It’s not only about money, status, power, but also about caring and loving. At  last, no matter what is the gender, no matter we are young or old, but WE ARE SAME. Let’s pay more attention to them instead our individual. How selfish we are if we ignore them? By hugging, it will help people. At least, it decreases their pain, agony, desperate and sadness from being alone. So what are you waiting for? Lets take care for each other ^^. 

wanna see the video ? Don't be worry. This is the link for the video :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=vr3x_RRJdd4&noredirect=1

Writing Assignment : Outline from 'Free Hug' campaign

Outline Paragraph Free Hugs Campaign by Arini Purnamasari

Title                            : Love is Free Hugs 

Topic Sentence            :

There is a boy using glasses brought a paper.

a.         Major supporting sentence 1        :

-          Yes, he gave offers free hugs to everyone

Minor supporting sentence           :

-          At first, there was no one person that care about him.

-          But he never give up! He still with his paper  ' free hugs '

-          And again , no one cares

-          People are too busy with their own affairs , running short on time , perhaps it's they deem unimportant .

b.        Major supporting sentence 2        :

-          This guy is still running and offers a free hug , and finally an old woman approached and embraced warmly .

Minor supporting sentence      :

-          One by one people started coming over to this guy and hugged him

-          People who previously didn't care about this man , now came over and hugged warmly

-          Honestly, it's very touching

-          Eventually people started to follow what is in this man's doing .

-          They bring a paper with the same purpose to give free hugs to everyone ..

-          They cuddle with anyone who approached , they even cuddle together

c.         Major supporting sentence 3        :

-          But when everyone started to follow what was done by this man ,a policeman came and prevent this campaign.

-           

Minor supporting sentence           :

-          This man is not desperate , he began collecting signatures of every person that he met.

-          The purpose of collecting signatures to support that it's to continue the ' free hugs ' campaign..

-          And total signatures that he got it's about 10,000 .

-          So amazing !Finally the police can't stop this campaign , 10,000 people have supported this event

Concluding sentence         :

And I think, the main idea of this video is a warmth. Warmth which human beings must to share and love. Why all is not considered too important ? when they don't have to pay for it . Warm embrace , is a simple way to make everyone be , one .

(source : http://arinihong.blogspot.com/2013_10_01_archive.html)

WRITING ASSIGNMENT : THE LUXURY PLACE FOR FUTURE

Everyone have their own dream about how their room looks like. Should do I. In the future, if I get any chance, I want to have a big living room which I can use to spend my spare time along with my family and I love a simple and luxurious decoration. Now I would like to describe how my room’s design. First I will place a large carpet in the room as base of this decoration. On top of it I will place a table in middle. 

Then in front of the table, I will place a big cupboard in front of the table where I can place some stuff. I will place television between the speakers, DVD under the television, books, and everything that my family needs to relax their mind. After that, for around the carpet, I will place some sofas. I prefer the brown one because it’s so cute. On the sofas, I’m also going to put some pillows and some tables beside every sofa. The last, I would like to place a lamp and plants for every corner to make the room looks luxurious.