FINAL ASSIGNMENT WRITING II : CARS

THE BIGGER THE CAR, THE SAFER YOU ARE

Big cars become safer than small cars for two reasons. The first reason is it was a fact of physics that big car has heavier mass than small car. The small car has lighter mass which is generally not as safe as larger or big car. The mass of cars are very affecting how the cars perform on the road. The heavier the car the more stable it would move. Large vehicles that belong to big cars have longer hoods and bigger crush zones. It gives them an advantage in frontal crashes. Car’s hoods basically use to protect the car from any hit from outside and keep the passenger’s safe. The bigger hood it has, the bigger crush zone it would be. A small car that has little hood cannot give the passenger big crash zone. It would be more dangerous if incident happen rather than bigger cars. According to the 2011 Insurance Institute for Highway Safety (IIHS) figures, fatalities per million registered vehicles decreased 55 percent for the mini car category and 47 percent for the small car category. There was a 51 percent decrease in fatalities for midsize cars and 45 percent for large sedans.The second reason is the vehicles weight of big car its resistance to rolling over better than small car. While small cars don't roll over easily, they lack weight and, until recently, were less likely to have advanced safety features like electronic stability control (ESC) or full side airbags. So, having a big car is a better choice to guarantee your safety than small car.

BY : I Made Gede Adi Kerta Yasa (1212021050)

FINAL ASSIGNMENT WRITING II : OUTLINE OF CARS

By :

Luh Suweni (1212021039)

I Made Gede Adi Kerta Yasa (1212021050)

Title                            : The Bigger the Car, the safer you are

Topic Sentence            : Big cars are safer than small cars for two reasons.

Major Supporting Sentence 1:

The first reason is it's a fact of physics that big car has heavier mass than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

The small car has lighter mass which is generally not as safe as larger or big car.

Large vehicles that belong to big cars have longer hoods and bigger crush zones, which gives them an advantage in frontal crashes.

According to the 2011 Insurance Institute for Highway Safety (IIHS) figures, fatalities per million registered vehicles decreased 55 percent for the mini car category and 47 percent for the small car category.

There was a 51 percent decrease in fatalities for midsize cars and 45 percent for large sedans.

Major Supporting Sentence 2:

The second reason is the vehicles weight of big car its resistance to rolling over better than small car.

Minor Supporting Sentence:

While small cars don't roll over easily, they lack weight and, until recently, were less likely to have advanced safety features like electronic stability control (ESC) or full side airbags.

Concluding Sentence:

So, having a big car is a better choice to guarantee your safety than small car.

Writting Assignment : Canteen “Seru” during the weekdays

Canteen “Seru” is the most crowded canteen in Kampus Bawah in which provides a lot of things for the students during their weekdays and there are also various activities there. When we come to canteen “Seru”, we will see so many things and people who are doing various activities there.Canteen “Seru”provides a lot of snacks, bread, noodles, crackers, candies, and also rice pockets as their food.There are also provides soft drinks, tea, coffee as their drinks.Not just food and drink, canteen “Seru” also has stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan and glasses to support the activities there.In the canteen “Seru”, we can see the seller do a lot of activities such as washing and cooking. All of buyers also can do some activities while waiting for their food, they sit and having chat each other. Some of them speak about their problem, their study, or even their score. Sometimes, the students eat or drink their meal at the canteen but some of them prefer to bring it to the class.Canteen “Seru” have two sellers, they can serve somethings that the buyers want. They can be waiter or cashier.Buyers just need to order what they want, then the waiter will come to serve their order .After finishing their meal, they can pay it to the cashier.Food and drink which are served in this canteen have different taste. They use their own flavor, its different with other. In general, the taste of the food in canteen Seru is very delicious, but if you want to have your own taste you can ask them to make it more spicy, sweet, salty or even more crispy.The refrigerator is full of sweet and fresh drink.The smell of food and drink often makes the students want to finish the class earlier.The smell of burning food, delicious, and spicy is like the devil that can disturb students’ concentration.And also, the smell of fragrant drink makes the students cannot endure their thirsty feeling. In the end, canteen “Seru” is exactly a place for students to get some food and drinks but sometimes it can disturb the concentration of students to study during the class. Especially during noon.